Just as the CTS-V news comes out, I review the CTS!
05-21-2003, 07:19 PM
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Just as the CTS-V news comes out, I review the CTS!
Click Here For A Complete CTS Review @ GM-Cars.com
I think you will all agree with what i say. Plus, there is alot of cool pictures.
I think you will all agree with what i say. Plus, there is alot of cool pictures.
05-27-2003, 08:01 AM
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Mervz,
I thought the review was pretty good, and I appreciate all the time put in, but I have one thing to point out constructively...
The review has a bunch of grammatical errors.
I know it is nit-picky, and that the internet is fairly lenient in this respect, but the validity of your opinions will be unfairly judged without dead-on grammar and spelling.
If you would like articles "proofed" sometime, I'd be happy to help you. Even the best writers in the world have folks who check over their grammar and spelling before they get published.
This is intended as CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, and not bashing. Please take it in that light.
Best regards and keep up the good work!
I thought the review was pretty good, and I appreciate all the time put in, but I have one thing to point out constructively...
The review has a bunch of grammatical errors.
I know it is nit-picky, and that the internet is fairly lenient in this respect, but the validity of your opinions will be unfairly judged without dead-on grammar and spelling.
If you would like articles "proofed" sometime, I'd be happy to help you. Even the best writers in the world have folks who check over their grammar and spelling before they get published.
This is intended as CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, and not bashing. Please take it in that light.
Best regards and keep up the good work!
05-27-2003, 08:13 AM
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Pacer, no insult taken. I'll be the first to admit that in my rush, i often make mistakes.
I'll be sure to take a hard look at it tonight when i get back in my office. Thanks for the offer to help out, i have a few more coming down the line i might send you.
I'll be sure to take a hard look at it tonight when i get back in my office. Thanks for the offer to help out, i have a few more coming down the line i might send you.
05-27-2003, 08:30 AM
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I look forward to seeing them Mervz.
I'm not God's gift to English by any means, but I know how much it helps me to have someone check my stuff.
Steven King has someone to help him, and I'll bet a bunch of cash that Mr. King has a great grasp on the language. Just like everybody he makes little mistakes at times also.
Fire 'em off when you can and I'll be happy to look them over. The best thing about the whole deal is that you can make the call yourself as far as the changes go - unlike newspaper and magazine folks who have to send it to an editor who will rip it apart as he or she sees fit.
I'm not God's gift to English by any means, but I know how much it helps me to have someone check my stuff.
Steven King has someone to help him, and I'll bet a bunch of cash that Mr. King has a great grasp on the language. Just like everybody he makes little mistakes at times also.
Fire 'em off when you can and I'll be happy to look them over. The best thing about the whole deal is that you can make the call yourself as far as the changes go - unlike newspaper and magazine folks who have to send it to an editor who will rip it apart as he or she sees fit.
05-27-2003, 11:14 AM
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Re: Just as the CTS-V news comes out, I review the CTS!
Originally posted by Mervz
I think you will all agree with what i say.
I think you will all agree with what i say.
But the car is still pretty ugly...
In my uneducated opinion, that is. 
TS
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